Where I am from, most girls I know of just slather make-up on, they look like clowns. You're the person who inspired me to try to use my vast collection of eye make-up people have given me over the years to try different things. My parents love this particular design that you've done, so do I.
Loooove the contrasting colors, they actually blend beautifully together, it looks like the perfect sunset into a warm clear night sky. I love makeup pics but I'm rarely moved by them. This one moves me, fantastic work.
The only thing I would dare suggest would be a gray iris to evoke the moon.